development
this is ok, the thing that bugs me the most about it is the slight mistakes in the piano, the little moments when the wrong keys were struck really stand out. Also it doesn't really do much. It's an idea more than a finished track. The drums are basic, the swirling fx are just an add-on that kinda complements the trk, but they don't do enough to keep me interested. That sounds very critical, but I have to be honest and say that I was hoping for more. I would suggest maybe bringing in the sections of the trk at a slower pace. start with the swirling synth, leave it for 8 bars, then add the drums, then after another 4 bars add the other swirly synth, then add the piano later, quiteer and not so in your face, who knows. I just find it very instant right away, no mystery, and no development. still, it's nice enough.