I like the sounds...
....I can't stand the cheese! I can appreciate the quality of the production, I can understand why you chose those sounds, (I think u should use them in a more experimantal, chillout/ambient tune with glitchy beats), but I am not a fan of this style of tune. A cross between Happy Hardcore and Trance will never appeal to me. This is Sickly Sweet, which I know u are aware of, but this sort of tune does my head in! You have a lot of talent and i feel u r wasting it writing tunes like this, especially when u can write tunes like 'Jizz Castles', bad name, great tune! Sorry, I just read that back and it comes across as a bit harsh, but this tune just aint my thing.