well...
...it ain't crap at all. The intro suggests it's goin to go into a trance style track and to be honest I'm glad it didn't! I like the funky loop, but it doesn't seem to quite loop properly, the beat is a little late. The sounds are good and a funky ass bass line will help funk it up even more. Keep plenty of room for more samples like the police radio. Nice job, I will be interested in hearing where u take this tune.