Has its moments...
...it sounds very fruity loops, progressions and beats wise. There's some real great bits of melody and structure, but apart from that, it's all a litle messy and sounds very basic. I imagine u are trying to experiment with the software u have, and fair play to u, but it doesn't do anything for me. Sounds like someone trying too hard. The bass is all over the shop and it's very apparent that u have just programmed in random notes. A little more thought and structure would make this trk better.
I like the synth sound and riff that comes in around 45 secs, it all goes a little squarepusher for about 20 secs, but then goes back to the fruity loops sound that i dont like. In my opinion u have potential, but need to get a better grasp of structure and what sounds good, co after all, thats what music is all about.