Sparse, but has potential.
I think there is a good basis for a track here, but there needs to be more variance and other parts added. Perhaps try adding some strings or some pads, the odd little sound effect here and there. Loadsa potential to be made into a great track, so just keep goin back to it and adding little nuances and layers. Try listning to a tune/artist that you would like to emulate, and seeing what there is about it that you like, then apply that to your tracks. I hope this review helps. Keep up the good work.
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